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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.

Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. oqLg
Dear Emily, Sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at last I put pen to paper to explain why I haven't returned that DIY book I borrowed from you. To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the book accidentally. I'm so very sorry. I know how important that book is to you as it was passed down from your late father. What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about DIY plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the book. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time. I've sent the book away to be repaired. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I'll send it on to you. Again, I 'm so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes
Dear Emily,

Sorry it's taken me
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so
long to write to you
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but
at last I put pen to paper to
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explain
why I haven't returned that DIY
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book
I borrowed from you.

To be honest, I've been feeling
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so
guilty that I delayed writing to you. I
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have to
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own
up that I damaged the
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book
accidentally
. I'm
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so
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very
sorry.
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I
know how
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important
that
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book
is to you as it
was passed
down from your late father.

What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about DIY plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time.

I've
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
away to
be repaired
. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
as new when I
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get
it back
next
week and then I'll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it on to you.

Again, I 'm
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.

Best wishes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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