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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit.

You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit. Qe6b

Dear Grandmother, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirit. My sincere apologies for not visiting you in last couple of months. Work and college really got me occupied, Eventually will make it up to you in upcoming weeks. Let me explain the situation, On one hand final year preparation made me immensely busy, Moreover I was working part time during entire college period. Consequently All this end in me neglecting everyone back home. I sincerely regret my scenario. Now I am done with my exams and have some off at work next week, Hence planning to visit You. We can have a get together and can talk about my nostalgic moments of college. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly

Dear Grandmother,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 spirit. My sincere apologies for not visiting you in last couple of months. Work and college really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 me occupied, Eventually
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it up to you in upcoming weeks.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the situation, On one hand final year preparation made me immensely
 busy, Moreover
 I was working This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 during entire college period. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 All this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 in me neglecting everyone back home. I sincerely
 regret my scenario.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I am done
 with my exams and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 off at work next
 week, Hence
 planning to visit You. We can have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together and can talk about my nostalgic moments of college. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Lovingly

IELTS letter You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit.

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

125 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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