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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit.

You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit. Qe6b
Dear Grandmother, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirit. My sincere apologies for not visiting you in last couple of months. Work and college really got me occupied, Eventually will make it up to you in upcoming weeks. Let me explain the situation, On one hand final year preparation made me immensely busy, Moreover I was working part time during entire college period. Consequently All this end in me neglecting everyone back home. I sincerely regret my scenario. Now I am done with my exams and have some off at work next week, Hence planning to visit You. We can have a get together and can talk about my nostalgic moments of college. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly
Dear Grandmother,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
spirit. My sincere apologies for not visiting you in last couple of months. Work and college
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
me occupied,
Eventually
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up to you in upcoming weeks.

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Let
me
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explain
the situation, On one hand final year preparation made me
immensely
busy,
Moreover
I was working
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part time
during entire college period.
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Consequently
All this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
in me neglecting everyone back home. I
sincerely
regret my scenario.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I
am done
with my exams and have
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some
off at work
next
week,
Hence
planning to visit You. We can have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together and can talk about my nostalgic moments of college. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Lovingly
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IELTS letter You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
125 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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