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Essay topics: A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but can't accommodate her. Write a letter to her

Essay topics: A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but can't accommodate her. Write a letter to her woXl
hope this letter finds you well. In your last letter you tell me that you wish to visit Bangladesh next month from 10th november to 28th november and want so stay at my place. I am very sorry to tell you that, next month I have seminar at london, which fixed last week. For this reason i have to out of country from november 1st to rest of the month. I am extremely sorry that I did not stay here for your hospitality. the seminar is very essential for my work and career. But you do not have to worried about it, because I made an alternative arrangement for you. last time when you visit Bangladesh you meet my friend sumaiya. Fortunately, sumaiya's parent would go to their home town to visit sumaiya's grandparents for the november month. As a result, her home is totally free and very suitable for you to stay. when I tell her about you he is laughing with joy and assure me that she can take good care of you. hope you will understand the situation. I am looking forward to answer from you. From Love, Esha
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hope
this letter finds you well. In your last letter you
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tell
me that you wish to visit Bangladesh
next
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month
from 10th
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november
to 28th
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november
and want
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so
stay at my place.

I am
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very
sorry to
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tell
you that,
next
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month
I have seminar at
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london
, which
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fixed
last week.
For this reason
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i
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have to
out of country from
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november
1st to rest of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
. I am
extremely
sorry that I did not stay here for your hospitality.
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the
seminar is
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very
essential for my work and career.

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But
you do not
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have to
worried about it,
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because
I made an alternative arrangement for you.
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last
time when you visit Bangladesh you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
my friend
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sumaiya
.
Fortunately
,
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sumaiya
's parent would go to their home town to visit
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sumaiya
's grandparents for the
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november
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
.
As a result
, her home is
totally
free and
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very
suitable for you to stay.
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when
I
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tell
her about
Consider adding a comma here.
you
he is laughing with joy and assure me that she can take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
care of you.

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hope
you will understand the situation. I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to answering".
to answer
from you.

From
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Love
,

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Esha

IELTS letter Essay topics: A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but can't accommodate her. Write a letter to her

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
191 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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