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At present you run an education center in your town and some students are asking about your center's working process, courses you offer, and payment for each individual type of courses.

At present you run an education center in your town and some students are asking about your center's working process, courses you offer, and payment for each individual type of courses. qaA9D
Dear Sir I am writing to inform you that you of you know that my education center. I have my education center in my city. it opened recently and I invite you there. I have my education center in my city. it opened recently and I invite you there. i brought there yes the best teacher from abroad. I advise you to come My education center has very good facilities, for example: those who study best will be given a big cash prize, and there is a bedaroom, there are those who come from afar. It is free for students and the best student of the year will be given a Malibu car. I invite you here. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require further information. Yours faithfully, Ibragimov Asadbek
Dear Sir

I am writing to inform you that you of you know that my
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education
center.

I have my
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education
center in my city.
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it
opened recently and I invite you there. I have my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
center in my city.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
opened recently and I invite you there.
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i
brought there yes the best teacher from abroad. I advise you to
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come


My
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education
center has
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very
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good
facilities,
for example
: those who study best will be
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given
a
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big
cash prize, and there is a
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bedaroom
, there are those who
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come
from afar. It is free for students and the best student of the year will be
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given
a Malibu car. I invite you here.

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Please
do not hesitate to contact me should you require
further
information.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ibragimov
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Asadbek
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IELTS letter At present you run an education center in your town and some students are asking about your center's working process, courses you offer, and payment for each individual type of courses.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
132 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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