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Dear Sir, My name Ngoc Ha, bearing Control Plate: 43C. The person who rented a car from car Rental Company for 100$ a month. Unfortunately, there were some problem. I am writing to due to the air conditioner of the car. A week ago, I rented your company car to carry customers from the suburbs to the city center but the air conditioner in the car has stopped working until now. Several customers have complained to me that the temperature in the car is too hot and forced me to deduct 10% of the trip fee. It costs me a lot. I tried to contact the hotline but no one could offer me any sensible answers. I am very disappointed with the service. Therefore, I request that within the next two days, you must fix the air conditioner in the car and compensate for the costs I lost during the trip. If not, I will cancel the contract with you! I hope this matter will be resolved. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply! Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir,

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 and compensate for the costs I lost during the trip. If not, I will cancel the contract with you! I hope this matter will be resolved
.

I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!

Yours faithfully
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