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We are writng a small party.

We are writng a small party. 2rWRb
Dear Ann, I am writing to invite you to attend our family party. It will be held on 5th September 2021 at my residense. We are organising this party as my doughter's birthday. She will be 6 years old this day. I want you to come to the party because you are our best friend. And you were the time when my doughter was borning in hospital. We are planning a small party. My husband are decorating our backgarden with colourfull balloons and I am making a birtday cake. We sing, dance and enjoy the party. I hope you will be able to make it our party. Looking forward to seeing you then. Love Charles.
Dear Ann,

I am writing to invite you to attend our family
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party
. It will
be held
on 5th September 2021 at my
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residense
.

We are
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organising
this
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party
as my
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doughter
's birthday. She will be 6 years
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old
this day.

I want you to
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come
to the
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party
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because
you are our best friend. And you were the time when my
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doughter
was
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borning
in hospital.

We are planning a
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small
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party
. My husband
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are
decorating our
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backgarden
with
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colourfull
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balloons and
I am making a
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birtday
cake. We sing, dance and enjoy the party.

I hope you will be able to
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make
it our
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party
. Looking forward to seeing you then.

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Love
Charles.
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IELTS letter We are writng a small party.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
115 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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