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A letter accepting the invitation

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Dear Ann, Thank you for the kind invitation which I would be honoured to accept. I was really pleased to receive it and I would love to come. It is lucky for us that you chose the weekends, actually as it is the only day of that weekends that were free. It has been such a long time since we have seen each other so it will be great to get together and catch up on all the news. Please let me know if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to help. Oh, one other thing, I suggest that you organise the music, the party will be more exciting. I await the event with great anticipation. Kind regards, Charles.
Dear Ann,

Thank you for the kind invitation which I would be
Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.
honoured
to accept.

I was
really
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pleased
to receive it and I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
. It is lucky for us that you chose the weekends, actually as it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
day of that weekends that were free.

It has been such a long time since we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
each other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it will be great to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together and catch up on all the news.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Oh, one other thing, I suggest that you
Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.
organise
the music, the party will be more exciting.

I await the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
with great anticipation.

Kind regards, Charles.
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IELTS letter A letter accepting the invitation

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
124 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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