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You have recently faced a problem at the airport. An employee of the airport helped you with this matter. Write a letter to the airport manager and say What the problem was? How the person helped you? Suggest the manager to praise this employee in some way

You have recently faced a problem at the airport. An employee of the airport helped you with this matter. Write a letter to the airport manager and say What the problem was? How the person helped you? Suggest the manager to praise this employee in some way qbE5

Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to update you regarding an incident recently at your airport. I was flying from Bangalore to Ahmedabad on 30/03/2021 with Indigo Airlines and my Passenger Number Request is BE12345. While checking in at Bangalore Airport, I missed collecting my Driving License back from the staff, who helped me in check-in process and collected my luggage. When I went for boarding the Flight, the staff on gate asked me to present my proof and that is the moment I suspected my License was missing. I started panicking and looking everywhere for my document. Seeing me losing my calm, the employee named Mr. Suresh, who was on duty at the Gate asked me to stay calm and inquired when was the last time I saw it. At that moment, I realised I must have left my license on check-in counters itself. When I learnt that, by protocols I cannot go back to check-in counters once the security check-in is completed, my worries had no bound. He then assured to help me out and went back to the check-in counter in no time and got me my critical proof back. If I would not have received the document on time, I would have missed my flight. Since I didn’t have much time to thank him enough, I am writing this letter to appreciate the help of your employee. Also, it would be great if you can appreciate him in front of the staff. Yours Sincerely, Bhumi Dave

Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to update you regarding an incident recently at your airport. I was flying from Bangalore to Ahmedabad on 30/03/2021 with Indigo Airlines and my Passenger Number Request is BE12345. While checking in at Bangalore Airport, I missed collecting my Driving License You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbackward
back
 from the staff, who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in process and collected my luggage.

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 the moment I suspected my License was missing. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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time
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saw
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realised
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must
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left
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check
-in counters itself. When I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 that, by protocols I cannot go You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbackward
back
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check
-in counters once the security This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in is completed
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help
 me out and went You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbackward
back
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in counter in no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 me my critical proof You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbackward
back
. If I Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)had not
would not have
 received the document on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
, I would have missed my flight.

Since I didn’t have much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to thank him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, I am writing this letter to appreciate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of your employee. Also
, it would be great if you can appreciate him in front of the staff.

Yours Sincerely
,

'Bhumi' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "Bhūmi"Bhūmi
Bhumi
 Dave