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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this to inform you that I have been to public library with my 3 year old daughter to attend the nursery rhymes classes on weekend. I have pre-booked the session on internet, The instructor welcomed us with whole-hearted and class was started on time. My daughter joined with other kids and repeated rhymes sang by instructor and imitated actions which has learned during the class. She had fun and manage to get some new friends which I personally liked about it. There were 12 kids in the class room with accompanied by their parents, but there is no sufficient space allocated to the class as I could see both parents and kids has struggled to find a place to sit. Hence, I would request if you could consider my request and allocate some place which can accommodate all of us.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this to inform you that I have been to public library with my 3 year
old
daughter to attend the nursery rhymes
classes
on weekend.

I have pre-booked the session on internet, The instructor welcomed us with whole-hearted and
class
was
started
on time.

My daughter
joined
with other kids and repeated rhymes sang by instructor and imitated actions which has learned during the
class
. She had fun and manage to
get
some
new friends which I
personally
liked about it.

There were 12 kids in the
class
room with accompanied by their parents,
but
there is no sufficient space allocated to the
class
as I could
see
both parents and kids has struggled to find a place to sit.
Hence
, I would request if you could consider my request and allocate
some
place which can accommodate all of us.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the librarian

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  American English
5 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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