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You have read a magazine article that mentioned a place you are familiar with. There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine and say • What the error was? • Explain that you are familiar with the place. • Why is it important to correct the error

You have read a magazine article that mentioned a place you are familiar with. There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine and say • What the error was? • Explain that you are familiar with the place. • Why is it important to correct the error 9L2Rj
Dear Sir, I am Dilbag Singh and I am writing this letter to inform you about the misprinting in your magazine. Your magazine the holic book is extremely popular in North India because many religion- related things are written in it. Yesterday, it is found that the recent article which name is `Message of Bhagwat Geeta` has some mistake in the location of the temple of `Lord Krishna`. The name of the place is Jyotisar whereas, the Pehowa has been mentioned. The Jyotisar is a village which comes under the district Kurukshetra of the Haryana state in India. As I am living in Kurukshetra, therefore I know each and everything about it. Moreover, one of my friends live here. I also have visited to this temple. The information in your article may have been just a misprint but still I feel you must correct it and re-post the article with the correct information. Because, it is a religious and historical place are entitled to get the correct information and so, it is important to publish it correctly. Hoping to read the article again with the correct information. Yours faithfully, Dilbag
Dear Sir,

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article
which name is `Message of
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Bhagwat
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Geeta
` has
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mistake in the location of the temple of `Lord Krishna`. The name of the place is
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Jyotisar
whereas, the
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Pehowa
has
been mentioned
.

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Jyotisar
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under the district
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Kurukshetra
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Kurukshetra
,
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Moreover
, one of my friends
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live
here. I
also
have visited to this temple.

The information in your
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article
may have been
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just
a misprint
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I feel you
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correct
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Because
, it is a religious and historical place
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to
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correct
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important
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Hoping to read the
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article
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Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter You have read a magazine article that mentioned a place you are familiar with. There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine and say • What the error was? • Explain that you are familiar with the place. • Why is it important to correct the error

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