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You have read about a scholarship offered by a university and wish to apply. Write a letter to the university and include the following information: the scholarship you wish to apply for some details about yourself your academic suitability for the scholarship and any other relevant information.

You have read about a scholarship offered by a university and wish to apply. Write a letter to the university and include the following information: the scholarship you wish to apply for some details about yourself your academic suitability for the scholarship and any other relevant information. 0E3bB
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about the scholarship program which your institution, Manchester University offers to foreign students. My name is James Bridget, a Nigerian national, and I have a B. Ss. degree certificate which I obtained from the University of Abuja, Nigeria, in the year 2018. I intend to enroll for my M. Sc. in the same course at your school for the forthcoming academic session. Manchester University is one of the leading universities in the world with over 1, 500 staff and the best in United Kingdom with 9 campuses through the state. It has modern methods of learning, affordable hostel accommodation, flexible school curriculum, dedicated and highly qualified professors and lectures. I understand that it is extremely difficult to obtain the scholarship due to demand, however, I believe that having achieved a first class certificate in my degree program and a score of 8 in all the band in the IELTS exam, I should be considered for the scheme. I am looking forward to hearing your response on my eligibility to receive a scholarship at your institution. Yours faithfully, James Bridget
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the scholarship program which your institution, Manchester
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
University
offers to foreign students.

My name is James Bridget, a Nigerian national, and I have a B.
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Ss
. degree certificate which I obtained from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
University
of Abuja, Nigeria, in the year 2018. I intend to enroll for my
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.
M. Sc.
in the same course at your school for the forthcoming academic session.

Manchester
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University
is one of the leading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
in the world with over 1, 500 staff and the best
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United Kingdom".
in United Kingdom
with 9 campuses through the state. It has modern methods of learning, affordable hostel accommodation, flexible school curriculum, dedicated and
highly
qualified professors and lectures.

I understand that it is
extremely
difficult to obtain the scholarship due to demand,
however
, I believe that having achieved a
first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
certificate in my degree program and a score of 8 in all the band in the IELTS exam, I should
be considered
for the scheme.

I am looking forward to hearing your response on my eligibility to receive a scholarship at your institution.

Yours
faithfully
,

James Bridget
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IELTS letter You have read about a scholarship offered by a university and wish to apply. Write a letter to the university and include the following information: the scholarship you wish to apply for some details about yourself your academic suitability for the scholarship and any other relevant information.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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