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On the separate sheet of paper write a letter to your friend giving news about yourself and your health.

On the separate sheet of paper write a letter to your friend giving news about yourself and your health. RRqVk
Dear Mike, How are you? Sorry for not writing for so long time. I had been sick for two weeks. In short I had covid 19. I had a headache, sore throat and fever. My sister had taken care me for this two weeks. At first day I was in a job and I felt sick. I was going to doctor. He inspected me and say me what I have covid 19. He advised me went to home and take aspirin. In addition I had sat in quarantine for two weeks. He sad what two weeks later I'm cured. Now I am healthy and I am in high spirits. I don't give up. I would be glad to hear from you about your healthy. Keep in touch. Ivan
Dear Mike, How are you? Sorry for not writing for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
long time. I had been sick for two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weeks
. In
The comma is probably missing here: "short, I".
short I
had
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
. I had a headache, sore throat and fever. My sister had taken care me for this two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weeks
. At
first
day I was in a job and I felt sick. I was going to doctor. He inspected me and
'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean "tell"?
say
me what I have
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
. He advised me
There isn't usually a preposition before "home". Did you mean "went home"?
went to home
and take aspirin. In
The comma is probably missing here: "addition, I".
addition I
had sat in quarantine for two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weeks
. He
Did you mean "said"?
sad
what two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weeks
later I'm cured.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I am
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
healthy and
I am in high spirits. I don't give up. I would be glad to hear from you about
Did you mean "you're"?
your
healthy.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Keep
in touch. Ivan
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IELTS letter On the separate sheet of paper write a letter to your friend giving news about yourself and your health.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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