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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to tell my complaint about disturbing work on the street. I have been living in Yıldırım for the last fifteen years and I love to be here. I am an English teacher in the Private Yıldırım School which is close to the local council. Last Monday I had an online lesson because of the covid, we gave online lessons to our students. However, I could not hear my students' voices cause of the noise which was disturbing. When I opened the window, I saw some trucks and machines for construction. It was in the early morning hours. They started to work every day and it became unacceptable. Because of the noise, I could not concentrate on my lessons. If they start to work at 10. 00 a. m, it will not affect our mornings. We will wake up without noise. And if they work only weekdays, we will have time for relaxing on weekends. I would appreciate if it is possible to finish as soon. I am waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully, F. Kırkgöz
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to
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tell
my complaint about disturbing
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work
on the street. I have been living in
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Yıldırım
for the last fifteen years and I
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love
to be here.

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I
am an English teacher in the Private
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Yıldırım
School which is close to the local council. Last Monday I had an online lesson
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because
of the
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covid
, we gave online lessons to our students.
However
, I could not hear my students' voices cause of the noise which was disturbing. When I opened the window, I
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saw
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some
trucks and machines for construction. It was in the early morning hours. They
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started
to
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work
every day and it became unacceptable.
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Because
of the noise, I could not concentrate on my lessons.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
they
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start
to
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work
at 10. 00 a. m, it will not affect our mornings. We will wake up without noise. And if they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
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only
weekdays, we will have time for relaxing on weekends.

I would appreciate if it is possible to finish as
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soon
. I am waiting for your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

F.
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Kırkgöz
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IELTS letter write letter of complaint to your local council

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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