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Dear Sir or Madam, To my great disappointment, I have left a piece of outfit in the Duplex cinema, after Avatar film. It is a dark brown jacket with two white stripes across the shoulders. Inside was my student ID, a bank card, and a library membership ticket, all of which are of extreme importance to me. I have been sitting at the first row, seat number 03, without changing it, and put the jacket on the sit to the right, as it was not occupied. I was under the influence of the movie when it finished, so I absentmindedly walked away. I returned after thirty minutes only to be disappointed, as the cinema room had already been cleaned and there was no sign of my belongings. Unfortunately, I had no success talking to staff members, and they advised to address directly to you. Under these circumstances, can I ask you to kindly provide me with camera footage, so as to identify the person who took the jacket? This would be a great help to me because I really need to find the aforementioned documents. Thank you in advance for looking into the matter. I will await a reply at your earliest convenience. Customer ticket: hg352, dated 28 October Yours faithfully, Oleg Buckeye.
Dear Sir or Madam,

To my great disappointment, I have
left
a piece of outfit in the Duplex cinema, after Avatar film.

It is a dark brown jacket with two white stripes across the shoulders. Inside was my student ID, a bank card, and a library membership ticket, all of which are of extreme importance to me.

I have been sitting at the
first
row, seat number 03, without changing it, and put the jacket on the sit to the right, as it was not occupied. I was under the influence of the movie when it finished,
so
I
absentmindedly
walked away.
I
returned after thirty minutes
only
to
be disappointed
, as the cinema room had already
been cleaned
and there was no
sign
of my belongings.

Unfortunately, I had no success talking to staff members, and they advised to address
directly
to you.
Under these circumstances
, can I ask you to kindly provide me with camera footage,
so as to
identify the person who took the jacket? This would be a great
help
to me
because
I
really
need to find the aforementioned documents.

Thank you in advance for looking into the matter. I will await a reply at your earliest convenience.

Customer ticket: hg352, dated 28 October

Yours
faithfully
,

Oleg Buckeye.
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, To my great disappointme

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213 words
6.5
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