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Letter to a friend asking him to apply for a job in your country. Tell him why he should apply, details of the job and how to apply.

Letter to a friend asking him to apply for a job in your country. Tell him why he should apply, details of the job and how to apply. WyKJe
Dear Tom, As you asked for my help in finding you a decent job in India, I came across an opening that might be suitable for you. The available post is for a junior developer at a start-up company called Asura dealing in data management and handling multiple projects. It demands on-site presence, however you may opt-in for the work from home option. I suggest you apply for this position as it is near my house in the heart of Mumbai, the city that never sleeps, so that we can stay together. Moreover, your qualification aligns with the requirement of duties mentioned. While you stay in Mumbai, you can even enjoy the flora and fauna of the sea as you always wanted to. You can email the task manager at human resources department. I am attaching a flyer distributed by the company as it has all the necessary contact information along with the email address. After sending them you resume and work portfolio, they will contact you if you are selected. I hope you get this job! We will meet soon. Yours lovingly, Matt
Dear Tom,

As you
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asked for
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in finding you a decent job in India, I came across an opening that might be suitable for you. The available post is for a junior developer at a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
-up
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company
called
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Asura
dealing in data management and handling multiple projects. It demands on-site presence,
however
you may opt-in for the work from home option.

I suggest you apply for this position as it is near my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
in the heart of Mumbai, the city that never sleeps,
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so
that we can stay together.
Moreover
, your qualification aligns with the requirement of duties mentioned. While you stay in Mumbai, you can even enjoy the flora and fauna of the sea as you always wanted to.

You can email the task manager at human resources department. I am attaching a flyer distributed by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as it has all the necessary contact information along with the email address. After sending them you resume and work portfolio, they will contact you if you
are selected
.

I hope you
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get
this job! We will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,

Matt
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend asking him to apply for a job in your country. Tell him why he should apply, details of the job and how to apply.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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