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YOU HAVE ORGANIZED A 90TH BIRTHDAY PARTY FOR YOUR RELATIVE AND INVITED ELDERLY GUESTS. IT WAS A SUCCESSFUL PARTY. WRITE A LETTER TO THE HOTEL MANAGER, TO PROVIDE THE FEEDBACK; IN YOUR LETTER, YOU SHOULD TELL; WHEN THE PARTY TOOK PLACE WHY IT WAS SUCCESSFUL THANK A STAFF MEMBER WHO WAS REALLY HELPFUL.

Dear sir/madam, My name is Mary from Vadapalani, Chennai. I am writing this letter to show my gratitude to you and your staff for making the birthday party remarkable for everyone. I had organized a Birthday party on 12th of January at your restaurant in T. Nagar, Chennai for my relative’s maternal grandfather who has just turned 90th. I had invited many elderly guests as well as friends of my grandfather. It went successful the way I planned it and it made my relative and guests delighted. Many elderly people were in the party and felt convenient all around. The hotel furniture was comfortable enough to sit and chat. The wide range of food were delicious and healthy too. I want to convey my special thanks to your staff for their assistance and service when elderly people approached for help. Your staff were friendly and well behaved. Once again, I can not thank you enough for making that party remarkable and I will certainly recommend your hotel to others. Thank you.

Dear sir/madam,

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 remarkable for everyone.

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 and felt convenient all around. The hotel furniture was comfortable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to sit and chat. The wide range of food were delicious and healthy too.

I want to convey my special thanks to your staff for their assistance and service when elderly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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help
. Your staff were friendly and This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.well-behaved
well behaved
.

Once again, I can not thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for making that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 remarkable and I will certainly
 recommend your hotel to others.

Thank you. 