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A friend of your is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university Explain why you recommend the university Give some advice about how to apply

Dear Mary, I have received your letter and pleased to know that you are going to pursuing the same course which I completed last year. I am so glad to give advice on this vital situation in your career life. But, before to all others, I want to share the information about this particular course so that it will help you to plan further. I hope that you already know that i have pursued Computer Programming course at Anna University at Chennai. this course is not a easy one as it look like. In the beginning, I had felt difficult to study this course but this university coaching and the help of lab tutors was very useful. Besides, Anna university certificate have valuable asset in IT field. Furthermore, it will help you to find a better IT job role and then your life will be settled just like me. I would strongly recommend that, you should learn this course in this university. To apply this course, you can go to the WWW. university. com website and you will find all the information listed there. If you need my help to apply I am just away from your call or letter and you know that. All the best for your studies. Yours loving Beula.
Dear Mary,

I have received your letter and
pleased
to know that you are going to pursuing the same
course
which I completed last year. I am
so
glad to give advice on this vital situation in your career life.

But
,
before
to all others, I want to share the information about this particular
course
so
that it will
help
you to plan
further
. I hope that you already know that
i
have pursued Computer Programming
course
at Anna
University
at Chennai.
this
course
is not
a
easy one as it
look
like.

In the beginning, I had felt difficult to study this
course
but
this
university
coaching and the
help
of lab tutors was
very
useful.
Besides
, Anna
university
certificate have valuable asset in IT field.
Furthermore
, it will
help you to find
a better IT job role and then your life will
be settled
just
like me. I would
strongly
recommend that, you should learn this
course
in this university.

To apply this
course
, you can go to the WWW.
university
.
com
website and
you will find all the information listed there. If you need my
help
to apply I am
just
away from your call or
letter and
you know that.

All the best for your studies.

Yours loving

Beula
.
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IELTS letter A friend of your is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university Explain why you recommend the university Give some advice about how to apply

Letter
  American English
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5.5
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