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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to notify you of my concerns about my current roommate, who is making my stay in the college hostel difficult. I am having unavoidable and unmanageable problems due to her activities and those are impacting my study badly. My name is Mary Smith and I live in room L-202, which is shared with another student. My previous housemate was rational, extremely cooperative and inclined to studies. However, my present roommate is a polar opposite and have frequent parties in which he plays loud music in the wee hours. He is two years senior to me and I cannot protest her irrational behaviours due to which my studied are being hampered. I would prefer anything quiet. My semester final is approaching and I would like you to shift either me or my roommate to another room. I do not mind the room type as long as it is quiet and favourable for studies. Thank you very much for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Mary Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to notify you of my concerns about my
current
roommate, who is making my stay in the college hostel difficult. I am having unavoidable and unmanageable problems due to her activities and those are impacting my study
badly
.

My name is Mary Smith and I
live
in room L-202, which
is shared
with another student. My previous housemate was rational,
extremely
cooperative and inclined to studies.
However
, my present roommate is a polar opposite and have frequent parties in which he plays loud music in the wee hours. He is two years senior to me and I cannot protest her irrational
behaviours
due to which my studied are
being hampered
.

I would prefer anything quiet. My semester final is
approaching and
I would like you to shift either me or my roommate to another room. I do not mind the room type as long as it is quiet and
favourable
for studies.

Thank you
very
much for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mary Smith
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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