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You have not met your friend who lives in another city for a long time. Write a letter to her Enquiring how she is and her work Write about yourself and what you are doing Invite her to come and spend the holidays with you

You have not met your friend who lives in another city for a long time. Write a letter to her Enquiring how she is and her work Write about yourself and what you are doing Invite her to come and spend the holidays with you Mrxka
Dear Diana, It's been ages since I wrote to you. I vividly remember our last trip to the mountains, and it was such an exhilarating experience. How are you doing these days? Did you find a new job after completing your certification course on Data Science? I remember you mentioned switching your job for the higher pay once you finish the certification. I hope you found the role you desire. I have recently changed my apartment and moved into the city. There are frequent business travels happening across, and it is easier to commute to the airport from here. Also, I recently got promoted as a Senior Manager, and the work has become more challenging. Fireworks are happening in the city for New Year's eve, and I hope you can plan to spend the holidays here with me during that time. You can stay in my apartment, and we can visit the food fair which has your favorite snacks. I hope to see you soon. Please do not hesitate to call for any help on the travel. Best Regards, Sooraj
Dear Diana,

It's been ages since I wrote to you. I
vividly
remember our last trip to the mountains, and it was such an exhilarating experience.

How are you doing these days? Did you find a new job after completing your certification course on Data Science? I remember you mentioned switching your job for the higher pay once you finish the certification. I hope you found the role you desire.

I
have recently
changed
my apartment and
moved
into the city. There are frequent business travels happening across, and it is easier to commute to the airport from here.
Also
, I recently
got
promoted as a Senior Manager, and the work has become more challenging.

Fireworks are happening in the city for
New Year's eve
, and I hope you can plan to spend the holidays here with me during that time. You can stay in my apartment, and we can visit the food
fair
which has your favorite snacks.

I hope to
see
you
soon
.
Please
do not hesitate to call for any
help
on the travel.

Best Regards,

Sooraj
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IELTS letter You have not met your friend who lives in another city for a long time. Write a letter to her Enquiring how she is and her work Write about yourself and what you are doing Invite her to come and spend the holidays with you

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  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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