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Your friend bought two tickets to the theater for both of you. But you cannot go for it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter apologize, explain situation, what she can do with the ticket

Your friend bought two tickets to the theater for both of you. But you cannot go for it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter apologize, explain situation, what she can do with the ticket Kl8LL
Dear Susan, Hope you are doing good with your life and enjoying work. It has been too long since we last met. I know, that's the reason you arranged a meeting in movie theater on monday but, I extremely sorry to say I cannot come with you on the pre- agreed date. Yesterday, my uncle met with an accident, he is hospitalised and in critical condition. My parents went to his home and they decided to stay with his family for two weeks. As you know, I have two younger siblings, they gave their responsibility to me so, it is not possible me to meet you. Do you remember sneha? Our college mate, I saw her yesterday at the city. She told me that she missed us a lot after her marriage because she was in Canada. She likes to celebrate a dinner party with us. I think, this is the best chance to meet with you. If don't mind both of you can enjoy at theatre. I am looking forward for your reply. All the best, Rasitha
Dear Susan,

Hope you are doing
good
with your life and enjoying work. It has been too long since we last met. I know, that's the reason you arranged a meeting in movie theater on
monday
but
,
I
extremely
sorry to say I cannot
come
with you on the
pre
-
agreed
date. Yesterday, my uncle met with an accident, he is
hospitalised
and in critical condition. My parents went to his
home and
they decided to stay with his family for two weeks. As you know, I have two younger siblings, they gave their responsibility to me
so
, it is not possible me to
meet
you.

Do you remember
sneha
? Our college mate, I
saw
her yesterday at the city. She
told
me that she missed us a lot after her marriage
because
she was in Canada. She likes to celebrate a dinner party with us. I
think
, this is the best chance to
meet
with you.
If
don't mind both of you can enjoy at
theatre
.

I am looking forward for your reply.

All the best,
Rasitha
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IELTS letter Your friend bought two tickets to the theater for both of you. But you cannot go for it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter apologize, explain situation, what she can do with the ticket

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