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Dear Mr. Jarvis, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product which was purchased last month. I bought a new printer from your company on 15 February. First of all, it was delivered after two days, when I tried to check it I heard strange noise. I emailed to your service centre immediately. But they were able to come and check it only in a day. Unfortunately they had to replace the product. In spite of this, I recieved printer from you today, I found it does not print coloured paper at all. I am very disappointed with your service. And I would be grateful if you could send me a full refund for the printer. Yours sincerely, Shakhlo Mirzaeva

Dear Mr. Jarvis, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 last month. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a new printer from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 on 15 February. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it was delivered
 after two days, when I tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 it I heard strange noise. I emailed to your service Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 immediately. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 they were able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in a day. Unfortunately they had to replace the product. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 this, I Possible spelling mistake found.receivedrelieved
recieved
 printer from you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, I found it does not print Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 paper at all. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed with your service. And I would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me a full refund for the printer. Yours sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.SheikhSheikhsShakily
Shakhlo
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