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Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -congratulate him/her on their win -give practical advice on how to spend the money -advise him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins

Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -congratulate him/her on their win -give practical advice on how to spend the money -advise him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins MrxVe

Dear Sara, I’m writing to guide you how the recent cash reward won by you must be used for the local society in my veiw. Congratulations! your long patience has provided some reward as I used to joke about your lotto’s purchase in the past, which has brought some fruit for you. I’ve heard from a friend yesterday about the winning amount, but I’m waiting for the confirmation from you. Some guidance, you’d utilise the cash for the botique shop, which you’ve discussed with me before and as you could not establish it due to lack of finance. In addition, it would assist most of the village women to be independent. Pros and Cons, winning such a huge amount will create problems from the local society and family members as they will be asking for cash from you. Therefore, you ought to utilise your money wisely. I’m awaiting your response. All the best! Ryan Smith

Dear Sara,

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some
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 I’m waiting for the confirmation from you.

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Some
 guidance, you’d Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.utilize
utilise
 the cash for the Possible spelling mistake found.boutique
botique
 shop, which you’ve discussed with me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and as you could not establish it due to lack of finance. In addition
, it would assist most of the village women to be independent.

Pros and Cons, winning such a huge amount will create problems from the local society and family members as they will be asking for cash from you. Therefore
, you ought to Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.utilize
utilise
 your money wisely
.

I’m awaiting your response.

All the best!

Ryan Smith