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Write a letter of complaint to DISCONO and request that some action be taken.

Write a letter of complaint to DISCONO and request that some action be taken. nXaW2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a record which I recently purchased from your shop. Last week, I ordered two records for my Christmas party via your website. Your description claimed that this product was the best choice and it was certainly worth its cost. However, when I checked it at home, it had some unexpected problems. A record has a noisy surface. At first, I thought this issue was caused by my player, but that noisy surface did not disappear when I tried on my laptop. In addition, I attempted to play the record again. However, it has only 32 minutes total playing time instead of 50 minutes, as your staff said. Therefore, I was extremely disappointed. I enclose the record with a copy of my receipt and would be grateful if you could send me either a new one or my money back at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Charlie Taylor
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about a
record
which I recently
purchased
from your shop.

Last week, I ordered two
records
for my Christmas party via your website. Your description claimed that this product was the best choice and it was
certainly
worth its cost.
However
, when I
checked
it at home, it had
some
unexpected problems. A
record
has a noisy surface. At
first
, I
thought
this issue
was caused
by my player,
but
that noisy surface did not disappear when I tried on my laptop.

In addition
, I attempted to play the
record
again.
However
, it has
only
32 minutes total playing time
instead
of 50 minutes, as your staff said.
Therefore
, I was
extremely
disappointed.

I enclose the
record
with a copy of my receipt and would be grateful if you could
send
me either a new one or my money back at your earliest convenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Charlie Taylor
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IELTS letter Write a letter of complaint to DISCONO and request that some action be taken.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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