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Ym of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card.

Ym of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card. PR00J
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in connection with the student identification card issued by our college. Three days ago, on the way back home from classes, I lost my bag on the bus, which contains all my belongings including cash, student card, credit card. I have already taken necessary action in this regard and also lodged the FIR with the police. As college has rules, not to permit pupils not containing a student card to enter the premises of a college, I am facing issues to attend the classes. Thus, I have already missed my last 2 days' lectures, which is crucial in this term end exam, and this results in, affecting my studies badly. I would like to request you to issue me a new student identification card, so that, once again I am allowed to enter the college and able to attend the lectures. A copy of the FIR lodged is attached for your reference. I would be very grateful to you for considering this matter and taking necessary action. I look forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Jagjeet
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection with the
student
identification
card
issued by our college. Three days ago, on the way back home from classes, I lost my bag on the bus, which contains all my belongings including cash,
student
card
, credit
card
. I have already taken necessary action in this regard and
also
lodged the FIR with the police.

As college has
rules
, not to permit pupils not containing a
student
card
to enter the premises of a college, I am facing issues to attend the classes.
Thus
, I have already missed my last 2 days' lectures, which is crucial in this term
end
exam, and this results in, affecting my studies
badly
.

I would like to request you to issue me a new
student
identification
card
,
so
that, once again I am
allowed
to enter the college and able to attend the lectures. A copy of the FIR lodged
is attached
for your reference.

I would be
very
grateful to you for considering this matter and taking necessary action. I look forward to your reply.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Jagjeet
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IELTS letter Ym of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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