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Write motivation letter to study abroad and give information about you.

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Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing in response to your advertisement posted on the social networking website and I have great interest to apply for the Master degree. Currently, I am working for education settlement, I mean school number 5 and my responsibilities are to teach elementary pupils who are from first grades to fourth ones. Although I have 1 year teaching experience, I have reached great achievement. My strengths include: teaching professionally and explaining clearly any given topic using diverse methods. In this teaching process, I try to consider the pupils' psychological traits to conduct them effectively. My professional qualifications appear to be well suited to your University's requirements. During my time as a teacher, I extended my knowledge of integrated skills like writing, speaking, reading, listening by participating in salary bonus exams that is aimed to test skills. Even under pressure I can maintain high standards of teaching applicants who want to study for the IELTS certificate. And thus I would have the opportunity to combine my interests with this IELTS course as they really have ambition to enroll university and study abroad. This process occurs after my classes at school. My current position as a teacher for elementary pupils has provided me with the opportunity to work in a high-pressure, team environment, where it is essential to be able to work closely with my colleagues in order to meet deadlines. In addition to my responsibilities as a tuitor, I also developed social skills for instance, socializing and interacting with other people easily. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss further details of the position with you personally. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to the opportunity to personally discuss why I am particularly suited to this position. Yours faithfully,
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing in response to your advertisement posted on the social networking website and I have great interest to apply for the Master degree.

Currently
, I am working

for education settlement, I mean school number 5 and my responsibilities are to teach elementary pupils who are from
first
grades to fourth ones. Although I have 1 year
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
experience, I have reached great achievement.

My strengths include:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
professionally
and explaining
clearly
any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
topic using diverse methods. In this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
process, I try to consider the pupils' psychological traits to conduct them
effectively
. My professional qualifications appear to be well suited to your University's requirements.

During my time as a teacher, I extended my knowledge of integrated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
like writing, speaking, reading, listening by participating in salary bonus exams that
is aimed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. Even under pressure I can maintain high standards of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
applicants who want to study for the IELTS certificate. And
thus
I would have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
to combine my interests with this IELTS course as they
really
have ambition to enroll university and study abroad. This process occurs after my classes at school.

My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
position as a teacher for elementary pupils has provided me with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
to work in a high-pressure, team environment, where it is essential to be able to work
closely
with my colleagues in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
deadlines.

In addition
to my responsibilities as a
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tuitor
, I
also
developed social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
for instance
, socializing and interacting with other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
easily
. I would welcome the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
to discuss
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the position with you
personally
. Thank you for your time and consideration.

I look forward to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opportunity
to
personally
discuss why I am
particularly
suited to this position.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write motivation letter to study abroad and give information about you.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
296 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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