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you or organizing a family party. Write yo your friend inviting her to attend the party .

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Dear Kate I am writing this letter to personally invite you Birthday party of my mother. It will be held on 5th December 2021 at my residence. The program will begin at 6 pm and dinner will start at 7 pm onwards. At the event songs will be sung by Alexander Reback. I will give my special price to my mother and also will be given a surprise too to her by my brother which is trevel yo Saudi Arabia. Please confirm your presence on or before 3rd December bg contacting me at 998916855823. Hoping to meet with all of your at Birthday party. Thanks Ann.
Dear Kate

I am writing this letter to
personally
invite you Birthday party of my mother.

It will
be held
on 5th December 2021 at my residence. The program will
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begin
at 6 pm and dinner will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
at 7 pm onwards. At the
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event
songs will
be sung
by Alexander
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Reback
. I will give my special price to my mother and
also
will be
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given
a surprise too to her by my brother which is
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trevel
yo Saudi Arabia.

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Please
confirm your presence on or
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before
3rd December
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bg
contacting me at 998916855823.

Hoping to
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meet
with all of your at Birthday party.

Thanks

Ann.
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IELTS letter you or organizing a family party. Write yo your friend inviting her to attend the party.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
106 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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