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You are working for a company. You need to take sone time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

You are working for a company. You need to take sone time off work and want to ask your manager about this. JjdB

Dear Jennie, I am writing this letter to request an unpaid leave next week. My older sister is going to study abroad next week. Before she’s leaving, she’d to treat all the relatives and share what she feels about us. Therefore, she’s planning to celebrate her a party for the whole family. She have booked at the posh restaurant just around the corner from where I live. To participate in this special occasion, I would have to be away from company for two days from 28th to 29th. My schedule for that week is slightly light and not so tied up except the presentation on 28th. For the presentation, Natty would be able to do in my place. Besides, no other urgent work commitments in that week. I would be very thankful if you could let me this time. This occasion means a lot to me with my sister. I’m going to thank her for all the support and care that she given me. Best wishes

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. My older sister is going to study abroad next
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Best wishes