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Write a letter to the manager regarding your work last year.In your letter say What u did.what u think could be improved.Ask for training request.

Write a letter to the manager regarding your work last year. In your letter say What u did. what u think could be improved. Ask for training request. bKpY
Dear Mr. Jonas, I am writing this letter about my work done last year and also would like to make some modifications at my workplace. I joined your firm on 21st January 2020 as the senior accountant. On joining i was made clear about my responsibilities and accomplishments. I fulfilled all my duties on time and worked accordingly. Although, i sometimes found it difficult to work and got confused, yet i managed it pretty well. However, to manage such flaws in future I would like you to organise training sessions for me on weekly basis. Moreover, while working i had found some bias prevailing among the co-workers. It is because of the dominacy of senior staff members over the freshers which creates troubles for junios to work efficiently. Nonetheless, they follow all guidelines yet the chaos continues. I think this could be sort out by implementing cubicle system so as to avoid frequent contact of employees. Kindly look into this matter on prompt basis to tackle it as soon as possible. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully ABC
Dear Mr. Jonas, I am writing this letter about my work done last year and
also
would like to
make
some
modifications at my workplace. I
joined
your firm on 21st January 2020 as the senior accountant. On joining
i
was made
clear
about my responsibilities and accomplishments. I fulfilled all my duties on time and worked
accordingly
. Although,
i
sometimes
found it difficult to work and
got
confused,
yet
i
managed it pretty well.
However
, to manage such flaws in future I would like you to
organise
training sessions for me on weekly basis.
Moreover
, while working
i
had found
some
bias prevailing among the co-workers. It is
because
of the
dominacy
of senior staff members over the freshers which creates troubles for
junios
to work
efficiently
. Nonetheless, they follow all guidelines
yet
the chaos continues. I
think
this could be sort out by implementing cubicle system
so as to
avoid frequent contact of employees. Kindly look into this matter on prompt basis to tackle it as
soon
as possible. I hope to hear from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
ABC
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager regarding your work last year. In your letter say What u did. what u think could be improved. Ask for training request.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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