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Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his or her garden. You and your family members having problems with the animals. Introduce yourself, tell the problem, suggest solutions.

Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his or her garden. You and your family members having problems with the animals. Introduce yourself, tell the problem, suggest solutions. rdo2
Dear Mrs. David, I am writing this letter in connection with the troubles I and my family members are incurring because of your pets in the front yard. My name is Shawna, and I reside in the same block as your just two houses apart. I and my family are 10 years old residents of the the Marble society. Ever since you shifted in our neighbouring locality, a month ago, our life has become difficult. The situation is due to the two little monsters of yours who are called the dogs. They are causing nuisance as our front garden is a common open space without separating boundaries. Everyday I or my sister have to clean the shit of your pets in my door steps. And if that is not enough, they have scratched my outdoor furniture’s as well. I would like to suggest that you should keep a leash on their necks and do not allow them to wander off Today it’s me who is complaining, tomorrow it would be some other neighbour. I advise you to look into the matter on urgent basis. Yours sincerely, Shawna patel
Dear Mrs. David,

I am writing this letter in connection with the troubles I and my family members are incurring
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because
of your pets in the front yard.

My name is Shawna, and I reside in the same block as your
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just
two
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houses
apart. I and my family are 10 years
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old
residents of
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.
the the
Marble society.

Ever since you shifted in our
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbouring' is British English.
neighbouring
locality, a month ago, our life has become difficult. The situation is due to the two
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little
monsters of yours who
are called
the dogs. They are causing nuisance as our front garden is a common open space without separating boundaries.
'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean "every day, I"?
Everyday I
or my sister
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have to
clean the
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shit
of your pets in my door steps. And if
that is
not
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enough
, they have scratched my outdoor furniture’s
as well
.

I would like to suggest that you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
a leash on their necks and do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
them to wander off
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
it’s me who is complaining, tomorrow it would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
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neighbour
.

I advise you to look into the matter on urgent basis.

Yours
sincerely
,

Shawna
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patel
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his or her garden. You and your family members having problems with the animals. Introduce yourself, tell the problem, suggest solutions.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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