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You have lost an item of value on a trin. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. Describe the item.

You have lost an item of value on a trin. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. Describe the item. JLEV5
Respected Sir or Madam First of all i am thankfull for spending your valuable time to read my letter. I am hera to inform you that i had loste my cellphone in the middle of travel to my college. I had given a written complaint to the local police station. But they advice me to send a ccomplaint to railway company as it was lost from your controled permises. I can give you a breaf idea about my phone. The phone is samsung S20 and silver collored coating with back cover and it was blue colour. The most important thing is i have kept my identity card inside the back cover. Moreover, there where a crack on my screen card. I think this information will help you to find my phone easily. On the other hand, please put a notice infront of ticket booking office this will help the passengers to catch the notice. Additionaly, tell them that tha owner of the phone will keen to give a valuable price to whome find the phone. I am shortening my words here and looking forwards you phone call. Sincerely Bdbdj
Respected Sir or Madam

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
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thankfull
for spending your valuable time to read my letter. I am
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hera
to inform you that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
had
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loste
my cellphone in the middle of travel to my college. I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
a written complaint to the local police station.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
they
Did you mean "advise" (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
advice
me to
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send
a
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ccomplaint
to railway
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company
as it
was lost
from your
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controled
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permises
. I can give you a
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breaf
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idea
about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
is
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samsung
S20 and silver
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collored
coating with back cover and it was blue
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
. The most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
thing is
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
my identity card inside the back cover.
Moreover
, there
Did you mean "were", the simple past of "to be"?
where
a crack on my screen card. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
this information will
In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help you find"?
help you to find
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
easily
.
On the other hand
,
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please
put a notice
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infront
of ticket booking office this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the passengers to catch the notice.
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Additionaly
,
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tell
them that
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tha
owner of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
will keen to give a valuable price to
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whome
find the
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phone
. I am shortening my words here and looking forwards you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
call.

Sincerely


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Bdbdj
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IELTS letter You have lost an item of value on a trin. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. Describe the item.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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