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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company.

I lost my wallet in train. Wallet is a bit torn and brown colored. It is made of lather material. It is back pocket size wallet. Wallet has 2500/- rupees and few visiting card. It also has my driving licence and aadhar card. I was travelling on 1st January, 2022 Monday in Torrento Express train in coach number 7. My seat number was 13 where I think I lost my wallet. I made payment for my lunch from my wallet at 1: 00 PM. I slept for few minute around 2: 30 PM on that noon, after that I do not recall using or seeing my wallet. It is highly likely that the wallet was dropped or theft from my back pocket while I took a nap. I request the train company to search in the train based on the information I have provided. The wallet is very important to me not only because of cash amount but also because it has important identity proof of mine. It would be great support if you can also check with railway station with help of police and check with passengers in the same coach. My contact number is 1234567890. Please contact me as soon as possible. I appreciate your support.
I lost my
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wallet
in
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train
.
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Wallet
is a bit torn and brown colored. It
is made
of lather material. It is back
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pocket size
wallet.

Wallet has 2500/- rupees and
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few visiting card
. It
also
has my driving
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licence
and
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aadhar
card.

I was travelling on 1st
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January, 2022
Monday in
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Torrento
Express
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train
in coach number 7. My seat number was 13 where I
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think
I lost my wallet.

I made payment for my lunch from my
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wallet
at 1: 00 PM. I slept for few minute around 2: 30 PM on that noon, after that I do not recall using or seeing my wallet.

It is
highly
likely that the
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wallet
was dropped
or theft from my back pocket while I took a nap.

I request the
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train
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company
to search in the
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train
based on the information I have provided.

The
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wallet
is
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very
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important
to me not
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only
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because
of cash amount
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but
also
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because
it has
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important
identity proof of mine.

It would be great support if you can
also
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check
with railway station with
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help
of police and
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check
with passengers in the same coach.

My contact number is 1234567890.
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Please
contact me as
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soon
as possible. I appreciate your support.
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IELTS letter You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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