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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. v. 5

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Martin Ben, and I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left one of my bags at your hotel before leaving Adelaide for Sydney. Unfortunately, I came to know about this unfortunate mistake only after arriving at Sydney Airport. Anyway, I stayed in room number 221, and I might have left the bag in one of the closed cabinets of the TV stand. Now, to describe the bag a little for your convenience, it is a small, bright yellow colour handbag for men, and it has a single white colour belt. As for its contents, the bag has some precious drawings of my little niece, who drew them only for me. Besides, it also has a few precious gifts which were chosen and bought by my family members. So the little bag is priceless to me because of its emotional value. So, once you find the bag, please send it to me in a courier mail service. And, also please don’t forget to charge the courier fee from my credit card. By the way, the credit card information should in on your file. Yours faithfully, Martin Ben

IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. v.5

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Martin Ben, and I am writing this letter to inform you that I have
left
one of my bags at your hotel
before
leaving Adelaide for Sydney. Unfortunately, I came to know about this unfortunate mistake
only
after arriving at Sydney Airport. Anyway, I stayed in room number 221, and I might have
left
the bag in one of the closed cabinets of the TV stand.
Now
, to
describe
the bag a
little
for your convenience, it is a
small
, bright yellow
colour
handbag for
men
, and it has a single white
colour
belt. As for its contents, the bag has
some
precious drawings of my
little
niece, who drew them
only
for me.
Besides
, it
also
has a few precious gifts which
were chosen
and
bought
by my family members.
So
the
little
bag is priceless to me
because
of its emotional value.
So
, once you find the bag,
please
send
it to me in a courier mail service. And,
also
please
don’t forget to charge the courier fee from my credit card. By the way, the credit card information should in on your file. Yours
faithfully
, Martin Ben
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
6 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resources: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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