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You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. v.4

You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. v. 4
Dear Stephen, Hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. Just so you know, I have had a great weekend at your house, and I hope that you also enjoyed that weekend. Anyway, I am writing this letter to you because I, unfortunately, forgot to pick up my new coat that I carried with me on that weekend. Now regarding the coat, it is a dark blue colour coat, with white collar and light-white buttons. The coat also has two side pockets on the bottom part of it. Besides, it also has a furry headcover. If I remember it correctly, I may have either left it on the hooks of one of your doors or inside the wardrobe of the room in which I slept. It is important that I get back that coat soon because the temperature is going to drop significantly in the next few days, and I have put some important letters, a small gift item and my wristwatch in the pockets of it. I need the letters immediately as two of them are from my head office. So, I would really appreciate it if you hand over the coat to one of my colleagues who will be travelling by your place after a couple of days. I have already provided your phone number and address to my colleagues. Yours sincerely, Jack Kyle
Dear Stephen,

Hope this
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letter
finds you in
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good
health and spirit.
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Just
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so
you know, I have had a great weekend at your
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house
, and I hope that you
also
enjoyed that weekend. Anyway, I am writing this
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letter
to you
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because
I, unfortunately, forgot to pick up my new
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coat
that I carried with me on that weekend.

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Now
regarding the
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coat
, it is a dark blue
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colour
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coat
, with white collar and light-white buttons. The
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coat
also
has two side pockets on the bottom part of it.
Besides
, it
also
has a furry
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headcover
. If I remember it
correctly
, I may have either
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left
it on the hooks of one of your doors or inside the wardrobe of the room in which I slept.

It is
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important
that I
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get
back that
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coat
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soon
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because
the temperature is going to drop
significantly
in the
next
few days, and I have put
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some
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important
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letters
, a
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small
gift item and my wristwatch in the pockets of it. I need the
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letters
immediately as two of them are from my head office.

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So
, I would
really
appreciate it if you hand over the
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coat
to one of my colleagues who will be travelling by your place after a couple of days. I have already provided your phone number and address to my colleagues.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jack Kyle
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
227 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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