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during a recent plane journey, you sat next to businessman

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to express my interest to the position of a waiter at one of your restaurants in Ottawa. I would like you to remember me if you forgot. I am the guy who was wearing a black jacket and blue trousers setting in the seat just behind you that is next to the window of the plane’s right side. Our flight, A940, was from Egypt to Ontario last Friday on Canada Air Lines. I just want to inform you that I am interested in a position of a waiter as a part-time job due to the fact that I am an international student. I think I would be convenient for the job because of my multiple skills. Not only do I am fluent in speaking English and French which are the official languages in Canada but I can also handle the critical situations with the customers humorously. I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Kyrillos Gamal

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to express my interest to the position of a waiter at one of your restaurants in Ottawa.

I would like you to remember me if you forgot. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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just
 behind you that is
next
 to the window of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
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’s right side. Our flight, A940, was from Egypt to Ontario last Friday on Canada Air Lines.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to inform you that I am interested
 in a position of a waiter as a part-time job due to the fact that I am an international student.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I would be convenient for the job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my multiple This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 do I am fluent in speaking English and French which are the official languages in Canada This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can also
 handle the critical situations with the customers humorously
.

I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely
,

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