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Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns.

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. 9YaB0
Dear Vijay, I am Auchit Patel. I am from Kiova drive flat number 203. I am writing this letter to complain about the noise in a block of our flat. One of my neighbors recently moved to next door and they arrange the party every Saturday with the loud music. So, every weekend I am disturbed by a loud music coming from the next door. This is very problematic for me as I have to wake up early every morning for read the books and meditation but these sounds do not allow me to sleep on time. As a flat manager, I request you to kindly talk to them in regards of this matter. It will really help me to rest well on time. I am waiting for your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Auchit
Dear Vijay, I am
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Auchit
Patel. I am from
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Kiova
drive flat number 203. I am writing this letter to complain about the noise in a block of our flat. One of my neighbors recently
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moved
to
next
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door and
they arrange the party every Saturday with the loud music.
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So
, every weekend I
am disturbed
by a loud music coming from the
next
door. This is
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very
problematic for me as I
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have to
wake up early every morning for read the books and meditation
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but
these sounds do not
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allow
me to sleep on time. As a flat manager, I request you to kindly talk to them
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards of
this matter. It will
really
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help
me to rest well on time. I am waiting for your prompt response. Yours
faithfully
,
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Auchit
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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