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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left wallet there

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left wallet there b55X
Dear Sahithya, How are you? I have just reached and find myself already missing your company. Thank you for your great hospitality and I really cherish those moments. It was a great time that I could recall all our old memories and the time we spent during our college days. In our vacation at Pennag, we visited plethora of places and spare a quality time. When I got back, I realised that I left my wallet in your house. I think my wallet is sitting on the dressing table of the bedroom I was using. I remember placing it there before starting to pack, and when taxi came earlier than expected, I must have forgotten to put it back in my bag. When you find my wallet, could you please pass it to Adit who is in Pennag this weekend before he returns to Hyderabad on Monday? I would really appreciate if you could pop around hotel to pass my wallet to him anytime on Saturday or Sunday. I feel this is the safest and quickest way to send my wallet. I’m extremely sorry for scatterbrain and inconveniencing you. Yours lovingly, Divya
Dear
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Sahithya
,

How are you? I have
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just
reached and find myself already missing your
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company
.

Thank you for your great hospitality and I
really
cherish those moments. It was a great time that I could recall all our
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old
memories and the time we spent during our college days. In our vacation at
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Pennag
, we visited plethora of places and spare a quality time.

When I
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got
back, I
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realised
that I
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left
my
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wallet
in your
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house
. I
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think
my
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wallet
is sitting on the dressing table of the bedroom I was using. I remember placing it there
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before
starting to pack, and when taxi came earlier than
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expected
, I
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must
have forgotten to put it back in my bag.

When you find my
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wallet
, could you
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please
pass it to
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Adit
who is in
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Pennag
this weekend
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before
he returns to Hyderabad on Monday? I would
really
appreciate if you could pop around hotel to pass my
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wallet
to him anytime on Saturday or Sunday. I feel this is the safest and quickest way to
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send
my wallet.

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I
’m
extremely
sorry for scatterbrain and inconveniencing you.

Yours
lovingly
,

Divya
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left wallet there

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