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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you Lgp6
Dear Friend, How are you? I wish you and your family are well. I really thankful to you because these holiday you were spending a quality time with me. The best thing happened we made a food, watching movie and we went for a picnic. Sorry friend, I tell you about my wallet. When I got home and I checked my bag I saw that I had left my wallet in your home. Actually, I was left my wallet in your almirah and I skip in my mind. My driving license, credit card, office card were left in the wallet and without office card I will not enter the office therefore I immediately need my wallet. You told me that tomorrow you will come in my city if I request you please take my wallet and give me back as soon as possible. I will see you again and I will waiting for you. Yours sincerely, Tony
Dear Friend,

How are you? I wish you and your family are well.
Did you mean "I am"?
I
really
thankful to you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
these holiday you were spending a quality time with me. The best thing happened we made a food, watching
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
movie and
we went for a picnic.

Sorry friend, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
home and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
my bag I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
that I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in your home. Actually, I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in your
Possible spelling mistake found.
almirah
and I skip in my mind. My driving license, credit card, office card were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
and without office card I will not enter the office
therefore
I immediately need my wallet.

You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that tomorrow you will
The words "come in" and "come to" have different meanings. "Come in my office" means "have an orgasm in my office." "Come to" or "Come into" means "enter." Did you mean "come to" or "come into"?
come in
my city if I request you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
take my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
and give me back as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you again and I will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "wait"
waiting
for you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Tony

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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