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Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents.

Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents. b8Vq
Dear Mrs. Morris I am writing to request your help. I attended a presentation skill course at your college from 12 September, 2012. My full name is Maryam Anas and my student number was GP 6731. The course I attended was Presentations skills training course, how to create and give successful presentations. My class instructors were James White and Anna Davis. I am about to start work at a very new agency and they have asked me to provide information about the presentation skill and any assignments and reports. Unfortunately, I left all copies of these documents at my friend’s house and cannot contact her at present. Therefore, I would be very grateful if you could send me copies of the course outline, the two written assignments and the end of course report as soon as possible. I would be happy to re-fund any postal charges. Thank you so much for your help in this matter. I look forward to receiving the copy outlines, Yours sincerely,
Dear Mrs. Morris

I am writing to request your
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at your college from 12
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Maryam
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Anas
and my student number was GP 6731. The
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course
I attended was
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Presentations
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skills
training
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course
, how to create and give successful
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presentations
. My
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class
instructors were James White and Anna Davis.

I am about to
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start
work at a
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very
new
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agency and
they have asked me to provide information about the
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presentation
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skill
and any assignments and reports. Unfortunately, I
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left
all copies of these documents at my friend’s
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house
and cannot contact her at present.
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, I would be
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very
grateful if you could
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send
me copies of the
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outline, the two written assignments and the
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end
of
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course
report as
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as possible.

I would be happy to re-fund any postal charges. Thank you
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so
much for your
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help
in this matter. I look forward to receiving the copy outlines,

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents.

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166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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