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you live in room in college which your share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work

you live in room in college which your share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work 3omX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you I have problem and it is difficult to work. I have share room with another student in the college. We can not manage our time. She feel annoyed because I have to finish my work at night to complete my task for tomorrow. I have to complete my work because if not I will not finish my semester. It is hard to manage my time and she is mad when I work in my task. At night is time to sleep but I have to finish this. Before I left, I do like to take another room. I appreciate if you give me the single room. I would like to claim the room as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Sarah
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you I have problem and it is difficult to work.

I have share
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with another student in the college. We can not manage our time. She
The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "feels", "felt".
feel
annoyed
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because
I
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have to
finish my work at night to complete my task for tomorrow.

I
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have to
complete my work
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because
if not I will not finish my semester. It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to manage my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
time and
she is mad when I work in my task. At night is time to sleep
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but
I
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have to
finish this.

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Before
I
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left
, I do like to take another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. I appreciate if you give me the single
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. I would like to claim the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sarah

IELTS letter you live in room in college which your share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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