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you live in room in college which your share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work

you live in room in college which your share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work 3omX

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you I have problem and it is difficult to work. I have share room with another student in the college. We can not manage our time. She feel annoyed because I have to finish my work at night to complete my task for tomorrow. I have to complete my work because if not I will not finish my semester. It is hard to manage my time and she is mad when I work in my task. At night is time to sleep but I have to finish this. Before I left, I do like to take another room. I appreciate if you give me the single room. I would like to claim the room as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Sarah

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you I have problem and it is difficult to work.

I have share You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with another student in the college. We can not manage our time. She The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "feels", "felt".feelsfelt
feel
 annoyed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 finish my work at night to complete my task for tomorrow.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 complete my work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if not I will not finish my semester. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to manage my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).time, and
time and
 she is mad when I work in my task. At night is time to sleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 finish this.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, I do like to take another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I appreciate if you give me the single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I would like to claim the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours faithfully
,

Sarah