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You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline explain what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline explain what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. Jmek
Dear Sir / Madam, I was one of the passengers who took the flight from London to Amsterdam on the 5th of March. Unfortunately, my luggage did not come out of the airline. I have already explained the same to Mr. Ford at the luggage help desk of your airline yet I have still not heard back from them regarding the same. My luggage is is black in colour with the measurement 35 x 45 x 25. There are 2 stickers on one side and a yellow heart sticker on the other. I would deeply appreciate if you could give me a prompt response regarding the same. Best Wishes.
Dear Sir / Madam,

I was one of the passengers who took the flight from London to Amsterdam on the 5th of March. Unfortunately, my luggage did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
out of the airline. I have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
the same to Mr. Ford at the luggage
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help
desk of your airline
yet
I have
still
not heard back from them regarding the same.

My luggage
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is is
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black in colour
with the measurement 35
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x
45
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x
25. There are 2 stickers on one side and a yellow heart sticker on the other.

I would
deeply
appreciate if you could give me a prompt response regarding the same.

Best Wishes.

IELTS letter You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline explain what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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109 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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