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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. 9Epp
Dear Arushi, Hope you are fine and doing well. Last week which I spent with you and your family in your hometown, it was one of the best holidays I spent till now. Each and every member of your family are so caring and lovable. I enjoyed there a lot but when I reached back to my place than I realized that somehow, I forgot my wallet there. It contains all my cards and ID’s which are really significant for my daily routine. So, I request you to please send it via courier to my address as soon as possible. My complete address is “109 Samman bazar Bhogal Jungpura near Jain mandir delhi-110014" and please write my contact number also along with address. And I hope you remember that we decided that our next holiday destination will be my hometown. I am very much excited for our next holiday. Love Aman
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Hope you are fine and doing well. Last week which I spent with you and your family in your hometown, it was one of the best holidays I spent till
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now
. Each and every member of your family are
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so
caring and lovable. I enjoyed there a lot
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but
when I reached back to my place than I realized that somehow, I forgot my wallet there. It contains all my cards and ID’s which are
really
significant for my daily routine.
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So
, I request you to
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please
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send
it via courier to my address as
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as possible. My complete address is “109
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Samman
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bazar
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Bhogal
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Jungpura
near Jain
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mandir
delhi-110014
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and
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please
write my contact number
also
along with address. And I hope you remember that we decided that our
next
holiday destination will be my hometown. I am
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very
much excited for our
next
holiday.

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Love


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Aman
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.

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4 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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