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Letter to your supervisor asking for three months off work

Letter to your supervisor asking for three months off work YQoQ
I write to request three months away from the office to complete MIT Oracle Certification I commenced two years ago. I hope to begin next week Monday, 17th June 2021. I am currently in the program's final stage; it is tedious and highly demanding, hence my request. I intend to make up for the study leave when I resume by tackling the knotty cash reconciliation issue in the Accounts Department. I will also take up the last system reconfiguration challenge we had with VIRO. I am thrilled to inform you that my training has exposed me to the latest FIFO System Crash technologies, VIRO Audit reconfig, and MS Database Optimization. I look forward to handling all the pending audit trails, database reconfiguration, and search optimization challenges we had in the past. I believe this will significantly improve our ratings in the industry and consequently the bottom line. I look forward to your favorable response.
I write to request three months away from the office to complete MIT Oracle Certification I commenced two years ago. I hope to
begin
next
week
Monday, 17th June 2021
.
I
am
currently
in the program's final stage; it is tedious and
highly
demanding,
hence
my request.

I
intend to
make
up for the study
leave
when I resume by tackling the knotty cash reconciliation issue in the Accounts Department.
I
will
also
take up the last system reconfiguration challenge we had with
VIRO
.

I
am thrilled
to inform you that my training has exposed me to the latest FIFO System Crash technologies,
VIRO
Audit
reconfig
, and MS Database Optimization.
I
look forward to handling all the pending audit trails, database reconfiguration, and search optimization challenges we had in the past.

I
believe this will
significantly
improve
our ratings in the industry and
consequently
the bottom line.

I
look forward to your favorable response.
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IELTS letter Letter to your supervisor asking for three months off work

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
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