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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the bag and its content describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her Write at least 150 words.

You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the bag and its content describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her AExN
Dear Sir, I am Harsh Shah, who spent the last weekend at your hotel in room number 345. Needless to say, that your hotel is the best in town and it actually lived upto its name when I was there. The staff and the food were the best that I have seen so far. However, I am writing this letter to inform you that while checking out, I left my office bag behind in my room. The bag is an American Tourister office laptop bag which is brown in color. It has a zipper on the top and two small pockets on the front. The bag has my initials HS written on the sides with black ink. The bag is containing 2 files, a small diary and one pen. This bag is really important for me as it contains the details of the busines visit that I conducted in your city. My meeting was scheduled to end at 6 PM and i was about to catch the flight at 11. However, due to some unforseen circumstances, the meeting extended and ended at 9. As I was getting very late for the flight, I hurriedly packaed my stuff and rushed to the airport. I believe that in this hurriedness I left the bag behind. It wouldd be appreciated if you can check the bag in the lost and found department nad send it to me by courier. I will pay for the courier charges. Looking forward to have a positive resposne from you.
Dear Sir,

I am Harsh Shah, who spent the last weekend at your hotel in room number 345. Needless to say, that your hotel is the best in town and it actually
lived
upto
its name when I was there. The staff and the food were the best that I have
seen
so
far.
However
, I am writing this letter to inform you that while checking out, I
left
my office
bag
behind in my room.

The
bag
is an American
Tourister
office laptop
bag
which is
brown in color
. It has a zipper on the top and two
small
pockets on the front. The
bag
has my initials HS written on the sides with black ink. The
bag
is containing
2 files, a
small
diary and one pen. This
bag
is
really
important
for me as it contains the
details
of the
busines
visit that I conducted in your city.

My meeting
was scheduled
to
end
at 6 PM and
i
was about to catch the flight at 11.
However
, due to
some
unforseen
circumstances, the meeting extended and ended at 9. As I was getting
very
late for the flight, I
hurriedly
packaed
my stuff and rushed to the airport. I believe that in this
hurriedness
I
left
the
bag
behind. It
wouldd
be appreciated
if you can
check
the
bag
in the lost and found department
nad
send
it to me by courier. I will pay for the courier charges.

Looking forward
to have
a
positive
resposne
from you.
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IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the bag and its content describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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