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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course pN89
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to enquire about the computer course which I came across in the college magazine. I have been quite keen in learning computers and I found it interesting, but it specifies it's for people who have finished an elementary course. Let me explain my situtaion. Although, I have never actually got a chance to study computing but since I was a kid, I have always been keen on learning various things in computers like how to paint, how to write various documents, and how to actually learn various programming languages. But unfortunately, I haven't done any elementary course to begin with but I am sure if given a chance I will able to do it. Would you kindly make an exception and please give me one chance to allow me to enroll for this course as it would really enhance my knowledge and will act as an added advantage for both of us. Please let me know if you require any other information. Yours Faithfully Shweta
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
enquire
about the computer course which I came across in the college magazine. I have been quite keen in learning computers and I found it interesting,
but
it specifies it's for
people
who have finished an elementary course.

Let
me
explain
my
situtaion
. Although, I have never actually
got
a chance to study computing
but
since I was a kid, I have always been keen on learning various things in computers like how to paint, how to write various documents, and how to actually learn various programming languages.
But
unfortunately, I haven't done any elementary course to
begin
with
but
I am sure if
given
a chance I
will able
to do it.

Would you kindly
make
an exception and
please
give me one chance to
allow
me to enroll for this course as it would
really
enhance my knowledge and will act as an
added
advantage for both of us.

Please
let
me know if you require any other information.

Yours
Faithfully


Shweta
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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