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You recently bought a children's toy online you noticed that it was not working properly. Write a letter to the mama of the toy company

You recently bought a children's toy online you noticed that it was not working properly. Write a letter to the mama of the toy company QmJX

Dear sir, My name is Poonam and I am a frequent customer of your online websites. l am writing this letter to let you know that I am deeply disappointed from the chargeable racing car which I ordered from your online site on 12th March. Let me explain the situation, I had order the toy car as a birthday gift of my niece. Unfortunately, I am not happy from this product. Firstly, the product was defaulty due to the fact that it has a number of scars on his upper side of the body. Secondly, the charger which came with it had broken wire which did not charge properly. Top of, the rubber caps which came for the safety of the tires were loosen and did not fit properly. To resolve this issue, I tried to contact some local shopkeepers for the arrangement of the charger, but, unfortunately, I did not get the charger. To be honest, at that time, I really felt annoy as well as ashamed because I was not able to gift this product to my niece. Would you please refund my money as I donot want to purchase this toy car now. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Poonam

Dear sir, My name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Poonam, and
Poonam and
 I am a frequent customer of your online websites. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterL
l
Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I am deeply
The usual collocation for "disappointed" is "with"  or "in" or "by" or "at"  or "about" not "from". Did you mean "disappointed with" or "disappointed in" or "disappointed by" or "disappointed at" or "disappointed about"?disappointed withdisappointed indisappointed bydisappointed atdisappointed about
disappointed from
 the chargeable racing car which I ordered from your online site on 12th March.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the situation, I had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "ordered".ordered
order
 the toy car as a birthday gift of my niece. Unfortunately, I am not happy from this product. Firstly
, the product was Possible spelling mistake found.defaultdefaultsdefault y
defaulty
 due to the fact that it has a number of scars on his upper side of the body. Secondly
, the charger which came with it had broken wire which did not charge properly
. Top of, the rubber caps which came for the safety of the tires were Consider using a past participle here: "loosened".loosened
loosen
 and did not fit properly
. To resolve this issue, I tried to contact This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 local shopkeepers for the arrangement of the charger, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, unfortunately, I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the charger.

To be honest, at that time, I really
 felt annoy as well
 as ashamed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I was not able to gift this product to my niece. Would you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 refund my money as I Possible spelling mistake found.donordo not
donot
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 this toy car This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully
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Poonam