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Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well.Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay . Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen.Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day.There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi

Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay. Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi yMr3
Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay. Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi
Dear
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Jyothi


Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and
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house
when I am away. I will be available on phone and
also
you can reach me at the hotel reception where
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
stay.

Tommy's food and medicine
is placed
in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her
Did you mean "to bathe"?
to bath
as I have bathed he
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just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
I
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left
.
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Please
take care of yourself.
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See
you
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soon
, Loving friend,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Deepthi
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IELTS letter Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay. Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi

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  American English
2 paragraphs
111 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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