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Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well.Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay . Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen.Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day.There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi

Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay. Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi yMr3

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.Joshi
Jyothi


Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 when I am away. I will be available on phone and also
 you can reach me at the hotel reception where Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 stay.

Tommy's food and medicine is placed
 in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her Did you mean "to bathe"?to bathe
to bath
 as I have bathed he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 take care of yourself. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, Loving friend, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphDeepthi.Deepthi!Deepthi?Deepthi:Deepthi,Deepthi;
Deepthi

IELTS letter Dear Jyothi Hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet and house when I am away. I will be available on phone and also you can reach me at the hotel reception where i stay. Tommy's food and medicine is placed in second drawer in the main shelf in the kitchen. Her breakfast time is nine past thirty and at 2 pm you can give her lunch which would be her last meal of the day. There is no need of taking her to bath as I have bathed he just before I left. Please take care of yourself. See you soon, Loving friend, Deepthi

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American English

2 paragraphs

111 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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