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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college .Unfortunately because of previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to admissions tutor and -explain your position -Apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and test during it.

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to admissions tutor and -explain your position -Apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and test during it. BkjV
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to thank you very much for inviting me for an interview which would take place on Wednesday 24thmay 2021. I was profoundly excited to visit you but. due to unavoidable circumstance has arisen which cannot be neglected. Let me explain you my situation, actually I have an schedule appointment with the dentist on the same morning from 10am to of time. Is it possible to come to the interview either on a same day but in afternoon? Or can we schedule it in on another day or a day after. It would be much helpful if you could let me know that regarding interview. Firstly, How long will the interview last and weather will be required to do any test during it. Once again I apologize of the not being able to make it the interview at the time that you wanted and I hope I will be able to meet you any other time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to thank you
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much for inviting me for an
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interview
which would take place on Wednesday 24thmay 2021. I was
profoundly
excited to visit you
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but
.
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due
to unavoidable circumstance has arisen which cannot
be neglected
.

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me
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explain
you my situation, actually I have
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an
schedule appointment with the dentist on the same morning from 10am to of time. Is it possible to
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come
to the
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interview
either on a same day
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but
in afternoon? Or can we schedule it in on another day or a day after.

It would be much helpful if you could
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let
me know that regarding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
.
Firstly
, How long will the
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interview
last and weather will
be required
to do any
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test
during it.

Once again I apologize of the not being able to
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make
it the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
at the time that you wanted and I hope I will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you any other time.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

IELTS letter You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to admissions tutor and -explain your position -Apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and test during it.

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