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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v.3

Respected Sir/Madam, With due respect I wanted to tell you that I have read an article in your esteemed Travel magazine about a town. First of all, I wanted to appreciate your effort to present about the town in such a beautiful manner, this will increase the exposure of this beautiful town it deserve. Actually I belong to this small town and I wanted to point out a factual error about this town in your magazine. Therefore, I request you to make this small correction to avoid any misinformation. It won't take much time to make the changes. Sincerely, Joydeep
Respected Sir/Madam, With due respect I wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that I have read an article in your esteemed Travel magazine about a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
, I wanted to appreciate your effort to present about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
in such a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
manner, this will increase the exposure of this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
it
After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “deserves”.
deserve
. Actually I belong to this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
and I wanted to point out a factual error about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
in your magazine.

Therefore
, I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
correction to avoid any misinformation. It won't take much time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
.

Sincerely
,
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Joydeep

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
99 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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