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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager, which was advertised on the Student Affairs Office notice board on 2 September 2016. I believe that my qualifications, personal character, and work experience make me a perfect candidate for this job. Currently, I am studying in the M. B. A. program at Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2017. I’m studying subjects that are relevant to the offered post. Moreover, I constantly perfect my management skills by taking various additional courses. During my studies, I have held the post of Junior Executive at «Hansel's Corporation» and improved my leadership skills, communication competencies, and ability to work in a team. While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained valuable experience for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for an interview at any time. You can contact me most easily by the mobile phone number given above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future. Yours sincerely, Paul Carter
Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing to apply for the
post
of Quality Assurance Manager, which
was advertised
on the Student Affairs Office notice board on 2 September 2016. I believe that my qualifications, personal character, and work experience
make
me a perfect candidate for this job.

Currently
, I am studying in the M. B. A. program at Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2017. I’m studying subjects that are relevant to the offered
post
.
Moreover
, I
constantly
perfect my management
skills
by taking various additional courses.

During my studies, I have held the
post
of Junior Executive at «Hansel's Corporation» and
improved
my leadership
skills
, communication competencies, and ability to work in a team. While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained valuable experience for the
post
of Quality Assurance Manager.

I am available for an interview at any time. You can contact me most
easily
by the mobile phone number
given
above.

Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future.

Yours
sincerely
,

Paul Carter
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IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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