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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this to raise a complaint about my lost handbag in your airlines while traveling from London to Vancouver. As the journey was going to take time, I had kept my bag in the cabin above my seat 26 B on the flight BE195. The travel was safe and comfortable, but as soon as I reached home, I discovered that my handbag was missing and I suspected it to be left on your flight. It was a brown leather laptop bag with my name embossed on the silver badge. The straps of the bag had handprinted cloth work which enhanced the look. As, I was traveling for a symposium, had to carry my laptop and documents for the presentation. The bag contained a white file, laptop, and a charger with a sticker mentioning my name on it. I would be highly obliged if the airlines could help me find my missing luggage as it is very crucial for the conclave. Yours faithfully, Ishita
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this to raise a complaint about my lost
handbag
in your airlines while traveling from London to Vancouver. As the journey was going to take time, I had
kept
my
bag
in the cabin above my seat 26 B on the flight BE195. The travel was safe and comfortable,
but
as
soon
as I reached home, I discovered that my
handbag
was
missing and
I suspected it to be
left
on your flight.

It was a brown leather laptop
bag
with my name embossed on the silver badge. The straps of the
bag
had
handprinted
cloth work which enhanced the look. As, I was traveling for a symposium, had to carry my laptop and documents for the presentation. The
bag
contained a white file, laptop, and a charger with a sticker mentioning my name on it.

I would be
highly
obliged if the airlines could
help
me find my missing luggage as it is
very
crucial for the conclave.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ishita
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IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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